This is the second page of scripting & thumbnails for a comic I'm working on for a class I'm taking at Evergreen called Illustrative Narrative: Step 2 with faculty James Blevins.

I'm posting all 8 pages in my scraps here with hopes that some of you might give me suggestions, pointers, etc... on it. I'll be working on penciling the whole of it this week and soon after that I'll be getting down to the inks, so any comments should be spat forth sooner than later.

Thanks dudes!